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by Hittokiri_korru from The Hidden Villiage

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Fear and Wonder

... And so they surrounded us, the wolves of the mountain with only one thing on their mind, food. Which we would soon become. The pack of three circled us in perfect unison. The rank of the wolves no longer mattered alpha, beta and omega all working together to feast on two lowly humans. The other human, my friend of twenty plus years, stuck with me in this worse case scenario. He attempted to escape through a gap in their pacing. The blood soaked roar and nip of the alpha soon brought him back to the center. On this cold lonely night three days into our expedition, after losing our rifles to the river and losing our third comrade to a hungry bear. We had figured that this voyage could no longer become worse. one-hundred and thirty meters from the edge of this forest of death, we ran into these hungry creatures, at first there were five but, between me and my friend killing two of them was simple enough, however those two were weak by the pack. The remaining three were the ones who in fact killed the other two after they fell before us. We could only watch in fear and wonder at this spectacular yet still horrifying sight. We managed to point the video camera that way when it happened. As they destroyed their own comrades we began to run. The remaining chasing after us shortly there after. We made it out of the forest, but that did not guarantee us our safety. At the moment we exited the forest, the alpha ran in front of us. There the beta and omega began to circle us, the alpha quickly joining in. All hope seemed lost when I looked up in the sky and saw the big glowing moon. My pupils soon began to dilate and the moon appeared crimson in my eyes. Soon my arms and legs felt hairy and they began to grow and rip my clothes. I then blacked out, when I awoke I saw a most horrible sight, my friend ripped straight in half and his guts spilling out. It was already dawn and I thought everything that just happened was a dream, but seeing my friend I realized something was not right. Out of the corner of my eye I saw the three wolves but they were also dead. They were torn up like wrapping paper on Christmas morning. They weren't torn up like my friend but the wolves no longer had their heads. I noticed the video camera and I replayed everything that had happened. This is when I saw the horror that I was. The very beast responsible for destroying my town when I was younger. Then I watched in horror as I saw that I was the one that tore apart my own friend. I dropped the camera and walked away, to go live in the mountains by myself. If I'm lucky a few people might see me and I may become a legend.


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caseyjones38 read my blog view my photos
Mar 15, 2008 | 6:03 AM

Was this written by Lon Chaney ? ( no relation to Dick )

Hittokiri_korru read my blog view my photos
Mar 16, 2008 | 9:24 PM

no

girlscout read my blog view my photos
Mar 18, 2008 | 6:43 AM

Did you write this? Very creative! Keep it up!

TheShadowKnows read my blog view my photos
Mar 19, 2008 | 10:44 AM

Was that the end?

Hittokiri_korru read my blog view my photos
Mar 19, 2008 | 12:57 PM

yes and no, it's meant to be open ended. I have attempted a few sequels, only one or two that I'm okay with.

TheShadowKnows read my blog view my photos
Mar 20, 2008 | 9:26 AM

Hittokiri_korru
Mar 19, 2008 | 3:57 PM yes and no, it's meant to be open ended. I have attempted a few sequels, only one or two that I'm okay with.

Are you published?

Hittokiri_korru read my blog view my photos
Mar 20, 2008 | 12:53 PM

no

TheShadowKnows read my blog view my photos
Mar 20, 2008 | 1:09 PM

Hittokiri_korru
Mar 20, 2008 | 3:53 PM no


Well, get busy. The worse they can say is no thanks.

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Hittokiri_korru

I am 19 years old, a raised Catholic but Agnostic and I work at a bowling ally as a pinchaser (also known as a pin monkey). My hobbies include reading manga, playing chess in which my ELO rating is 1135, watching anime, messing with technology although my internet slang vocabulary is rather poor, and I am a 4th Kyu (green Belt) in Traditional Chinese Kenpo where I am also participating in Shoot-fighting. I intend to teach Karate for a living. I'm not the kind of person to boycott, protest or march because of something, whether or not I believe in it. However I would like to note that I have been boycotting McDonald's since August 2007, I intend to continue until they offer the regular menu at all hours. My website is http://jinchu.weebly.com/

Member Since: 5/3/2007